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I need to know what u guys think about the guys that I have chosen my characters to look like. Here are descriptions:

@Daniel-Has never been social, only child, his parents never fight in front of him, he has a really good life. His dad writes romantic poetry, so Daniel wants to find his “true love”. He has had dreams of a girl, scenes of what she does a few days at school or on weekends, and he really wants to find her. Hes kinda sensitive, he wants to help the girl, and he pays the bills to own a house for him, his adopted siblings (Hailey and Andrew), and his girlfriend (which is the girl from his dreams).

@Scott-Is the best friend to Daniel’s gf (has been for several years). He secretly loves her, but loves her enough to not rush her. His main priority is to keep her safe, safe from people such as his fraternal twin brother, Law (the girl’s ex that had abused her). Scott lives with Law, and his drug addict mom that never talks to them, and is always out. Scott is the good twin, and Law is the bad twin, in a perspective. Eventually, his best friend leaves him, and he becomes depressed. I want him to be cute/hot because I want readers to either like Daniel, or Scott.

@Law-He cares for no one. Has no respect for anyone. He is abusive. He gets into lots of trouble. He doesnt care about the law. His full name is Lawrence, but no one calls him that. He needs to be hot at least, because a lot of girls are willing to do anything to be with him.

OK, here are the pictures!

Daniel-

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Scott-

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Law-

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Characters:

Elizabeth Ashlee Frand
Sex: Female
Age: 14
Eye: Light Blue
Hair: Long silky blonde
Skin: Pale
Height: 4”11
Clothes: Jeans, T-shirt, and converse.
Personality: The shy, quiet type of person.
Extra: Is like two people. The people who people want her to be, and the person she is truly inside. And has a phobia of being alone.
Life story: very close to her brother, parents fight a lot.

Justin Methius Frand
Sex: male
Age: 18
Eye: Light Green
Hair: Shaggy, silky, brown
Skin: Tan
Height: 6’2
Clothes: Tight Jeans, Flannel shirts, and Moccasins
Personality: Very laid back, but when is mad gets very upset like the world is against him.
Extra: Has friends whom are addicted to all kinds of drugs, which screws him up.
Life story: close to his sister, gets hooked on drugs (forcing him to not swear into the military)

Terrance Frand
Sex: male
Age: 42
Eye: Dark Grey
Hair: Short dirty blonde hair
Skin: Pale
Height: 6’4
Clothes: Jeans, and a t-shirt
Personality: Constantly pissy, not always nice, and very lazy.
Extra: Alcholic
Life story: Mom was a drug addict and dad was abusive. Wich lead him to heavy drugs and abusing alchol at a young age, he got off of drugs around the age of 20 by going to rehab, but drinking just stuck.

Macy Frand
Sex: Female
Age: 40
Eye: Dark Green
Hair: Long (to her waist) blonde hair, dabbed with grey.
Skin: Pale
Height: 5’00
Clothes: Vintage things.
Personality: Very peaceful, hippy-like, takes things calmly.
Extra: Wants out of the relationship with Terrance, but doesn’t have the heart.
Life story- Very rich, had great life around the age of 17 then ran off with Terrance, and got married. Life hasn’t been the same since.

Thank You.

My story so far (chapter 1 at least) is one of my questions.
go to my profile and it is the last question i posted(:
(This is not based on me. 100% fiction)

I am starting a new teen romance type novel and I really need help with naming my characters!
1. The first one is a fifteen year old girl who is very opinionated and stubborn. She’s lived a hard life without a mother. Her sister is the perfect sibling and she’s just the non athletic, smart girl that doesn’t apply herself as much as she could because she’s always been told that she’s worthless no matter what she does. She’s her own person, she’s slightly cynical and bitter, she loves indie music, and she doesn’t believe in love or let herself get close to anyone. She is very short (5 feet tall), has very bright orangey-hazel eyes, short dark brown hair, is thin and curvy, and is known for being very pretty.
2. This seventeen year old boy plays the heart broken romantic. Character #1 cut the chords when she felt like he was becoming too attached to her after almost four months of them dating. His parents are divorced and his mother was married to an abusive drunk for quite some time before their divorce a few years ago. His dad is on his third marriage. It is hard for this guy to get close to people also, because of his parents relationships and because of all of the step siblings he’s had and then lost. But for some reason he thought he loved Character #1 and now they’re broken up. He’s very scrawny, not very tall, has tanned skin, very handsome facial features, messy medium brown hair and puppy dog brown eyes.
3. This character is the eighteen year old troubled, rebellious musician. He plays the guitar and sings. His mother died ten years ago and his father gave him up, so he lived with his grandparents. He’s battled alcoholism, eating disorders, and has turned to drugs. He has been known for sleeping around and never being able to commit to anything or anyone. He has light brown hair with blonde highlights, he’s thin but toned, he isn’t very tall, and he has soft brown eyes. He likes to dress very.. erratically. (Skinny jeans, bright deep v necks, sandals, etc.)

Raven Von Trese
she is 16 years old and weighs 120 pounds.She is very short for her age.She a moon pale skiontone with big brown eyes and dark Black hair with blue streaks.
her family was tron apart by drug addicted hooker for a mother and a father thats never around no one really gets her she only has one firend Benji Lewis who cam from the same background as her he is the only person who dosen’t hate her.

Velma Von Trese
Raven’s Mom
36 years old
weighs 100 pounds
is about 5’6 tall
She is a very skiny has bleched blonde hair and a fake tan with light green eyes.
She dosen’t care at all about her daughter and is normally to wasted to walk so most of the time she passed out on the floor or out on the streets looking for cleints.or she at the local bar getting wasted.and somtimes she hits her daughter just for fun.
heres the other two main people

Benji Lewis
he is 15 years old
weighs 130
around 6’11 tall.
He has dark black hair with beautiful blue eyes
he has snow white skin.
Benji has know Raven all of his life.His mom left him and his dad on his 13th brithday for a billanroeHe hasn’t been the same ever since.He eats lunch away from the back stabing,curel,evil preps that try to make his and raven’s life even worse than it is by tping their small little trailers every Halloween.
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Marcy A.K.A the most popular gril in school
she is 17 she failed two grades
weighs 90 pounds
she was platium blonde hair with baby blue eyes and has tan skintone
she loves two ruin other people’s lives like raven and benji because ther emo and she thinks there wired so her and her group chose to make fun of them and sya they have grems and are freaks just becaue.

Gender: Boy
Name: Ben McMillan
Description: Average height size, brownish blond hair, average complexion, no freckles, blue eyes. Age: 17
Siblings: None
Personality: Funny guy, charming, and he loves music and the arts, but doesn’t play an instrument. He does write poems though, mostly about the ocean, because his dream is to live there. He has only been to the ocean once in his life, and fell in love with it. But, being kind and charming, he has an extremely hard time being honest to people, and will tell them what they want to hear instead of the truth. His bad habit of not telling the truth can go a bit farther an he often lies to get out of bad situations.
Home life: His parents aren’t the “best” people, and he knows it. They met in drug rehab, and they are kind of detached from Ben, and don’t get involved with his school functions or his social life much. They live in a kind of run down area in a small, old house.

Gender: Female
Name: Victoria Fabrizio
Age: 17
Siblings: None
Description: A little bit below average height, acceptionally slim, green eyes, long dark brown hair and a scar that curves around the outside of her left eyesocket from an incedent when she was 5. She is of 100% Italian heritage, so she has a slightly darker complexion.
Personality: Very quiet and reserved,only a few friends because she finds it extremely hard to trust people due to very bad anxiety issues caused by her home life. As a result, she buries herself in her music, and plays the cello in her highschool orchestra. She plans on applying for Gilliard (i don’t know how to spell that) and continuing on with a career in an orchestra. She is quite smart and witty. Also she has acceptional wilderness and survival skills (see home life)
Home life: Her family lives in a 3 bedroom apartment in the middle of Chicago, and her dad is part of the Chicago Mob. Because this, her mother had to take her to her uncle’s house that is somewhere in the midst of thick wilderness (Victoria does not know where exactly because her mother never told ehr for her own safety) which is where she learned how to survive and whatnot.

And yes, they eventually fall in love and the girl does help him survive. But do they sound like Katniss and Peeta?

This is the story. It has a beginning, middle, but now I need an end. Read it and comment me with your ideas after. Thanks.

There is a boy named Michael Powell. He was born when his mother was 15 years of age. She had to give up her education to support him, which ruined her life, and it eventually drove her into drugs. The father (ex-convict) would beat the kid. For all of Mike’s life, his mom would say “Without you, my life could have been different.” A few years later, the mom gave birth to 6 other kids, and she would leave home for days, smoking crack, so Michael had to take responsibility of the family, taking care of all 6 of his siblings. At the age of 9, he got a job to support the family, but everyone who knew them thought they were just a normal regular family. With little money however, they were forced to sleep wherever they could (cars, benches, alleys, etc.). Mike’s mom would get into jail quite often, but when she was released, she would make another baby, and then she would soon be brought back to jail for criminal action. This made Mike’s life more stressful. One night, when all the kids were asleep except for Mike, Mike had decided to jump off a building and commit suicide to end his miserable life….

That’s the story so far. Now, could you help me end this story in a character’s perspective please?

The characters that are valid are: One or All of the Kids, Their Loving Grandma, or Mike’s Abusive Mother

Please Comment for Ideas!!!
Thanks!!!