Comments on: Messed-Up Romance [JoBro FanFic] Chapter 28

By: iOwnAtSoccer

iOwnAtSoccer — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 14:52:06 +0000

woooooaahhhh!!!
AMAZZZINGLISCIOUS!!
I LOVE THIS STORY!
FIVE STARS!

By: Hooters56

Hooters56 — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 14:46:28 +0000

didnt expect that post soon

By: JoBroLuvr42708

JoBroLuvr42708 — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 14:44:54 +0000

LOVED IT!!!

By: jb4ever9802

jb4ever9802 — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 14:34:56 +0000

HOLY CRAP!!!3 gay people in the story,that is a messed up romance!!!
well done!!!=D

By: crprincess0lovejonas

crprincess0lovejonas — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 14:26:08 +0000

love the story…but i hate carmen(buttface)

By: thewreckers12

thewreckers12 — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 13:42:21 +0000

this story is full of surprises! :p
~thewreckers12

By: halji1115

halji1115 — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 13:39:14 +0000

So let me get this straight.
Carmen paid Halle to kill Gabrielle but she only beat her unconsious?
And what I wanna know is why Carmen wanted Gabrielle dead.
I would gladly appreciate it if someone would reply to my question.
Thanks!
- Jill.

By: JoBroLover1995

JoBroLover1995 — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 13:30:20 +0000

hey your story is really good…im gonna sub now.

By: argentinachika

argentinachika — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 13:19:00 +0000

HOLY SHITTTT.!!!!!

By: Jonas4Life12

Jonas4Life12 — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 12:35:36 +0000

– Clip From the Chapter—

Halle: I can’t kill an inoccent life.

Carmen: That girl is no inoccent little piece of cake. She told that curly headed freak, whats his name? Oh yes! Kevin… She told him my whole life story. That my father was a regular person locked up in prison, my mother was in rehab and that I was only a stripper to get attention from Joe, the love of my life. Who has dumped me like a pile of pudding, once he found out the truth.

By: FFXiscoolandhot

FFXiscoolandhot — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 12:27:27 +0000

AWESOME! Absolutely awesome!

By: xoxoTaffyxoxo

xoxoTaffyxoxo — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 11:32:00 +0000

woah!!!!! your title really does match your story!! in a good way, i mean. Three people that are gay!! This is so… wow!

By: pame4me

pame4me — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 10:48:54 +0000

I liked carmen! well only during the firsts fanfics… but now I dont… Carrie rules!

By: suxaniita

suxaniita — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 09:54:59 +0000

WoOOw!!!!
creepy haha love it btw

By: halji1115

halji1115 — Mon, 01 Feb 2010 09:35:34 +0000

oh so she told kevin, who told joe?
and he broke up with her?